And now it’s time to return to the Ordinary World, and leave the magic of the Special World behind. The lessons have been learned, the growth attained, the boon recovered. But we are not done yet, and neither is our Hero.
The Road Back
- A few heroes stay in the Special World, but most head back
- Story’s energy is revved up again (push back up to light)
- Return to Ordinary World and implement lessons learned in Special World
- Hero may fear that wisdom and magic of Ordeal could evaporate in the harsh light of the common day – Fear, skeptics,
- Hero shares anyway
- Hero is rededicated to adventure
- Threshold from Act II to Act III
- May change aim of story
- Motivation can be inner or outer
- Finish the enemy – or they may rise up again, angrier than ever
- May be a chase scene
- Pursuit by an admirer can be an interesting twist
- Pursuit of escaped villain
- Possible catastrophic reversal of Hero’s good fortune – reality
- Could be Delayed Crisis spoken of earlier
- Road back could be a brief moment or an elaborate sequence
- May be a chase scene
What is important is that our Hero is not out of the woods quite yet. Nothing comes easy, and even when he thinks he is all finished conquering the world, he’s still got to be on point and ready. There will be resistance!
A printable version, for your reference, can be found here: Stage 10: The Road Back
To view a chronological listing of the posts in this series, continue below:
- Structure Series #1: First Things First, or Donald Maass Strikes Again (6/8/2015)
- Structure Series #2: Plotting for the Pantser (6/11/2015)
- Structure Series #3: To Begin… a Story Engineering overview (6/18/2015)
- Structure Series #4: Part One (6/24/2015)
- Structure Series #5: First Plot Point (7/1/2015)
- Structure Series #6: Part Two (and Pinch Point One) (7/5/2015)
- Structure Series #7: Midpoint (7/10/2015)
- Story Structure #8: Part Three (and Pinch Point Two) (7/15/2015)
- Story Structure #9: Second Plot Point (7/21/2015)
- Story Structure #10: Part Four (7/27/2015)
- Story Structure #11: Story Engineering Wrap-Up (8/16/2015)
- Story Structure #12: Introducing The Writer’s Journey (8/19/2015)
- Story Structure #13: The Writer’s Journey: The Archetypes and the Map (8/20/2015)
- Story Structure #14: Act I, Stage 1: The Ordinary World (8/21/2015)
- Story Structure #15: Act I, Stage 2: The Call to Adventure (8/22/2015)
- Story Structure #16: Act I, Stage 3: Refusal of the Call (8/23/2015)
- Story Structure #17: Act I, Stage 4: Meeting with the Mentor (8/24/2015)
- Story Structure #18: Act I, Stage 5: Crossing the First Threshold (8/25/2015)
- Story Structure #19: Act II, Stage 6: Tests, Allies, and Enemies (8/26/2015)
- Story Structure #20: Act II, Stage 7: Approach to the Inmost Cave (8/27/2015)
- Story Structure #21: Act II, Stage 8: The Ordeal (8/28/2015)
- Story Structure #22: Act II, Stage 9: Seizing the Reward (8/29/2015)
- Story Structure #23: Act III, Stage 10: The Road Back (8/30/2015)
- Story Structure #24: Act III, Stage 11: The Resurrection (8/31/2015)
- Story Structure #25: Act III, Stage 12: Return with the Elixer (9/1/2015)
- Story Structure #26: Wrap-Up (9/2/2015)
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